And always, always, remembering those nights. Some nights. When someone else is the one to bring me back to that all important matter of who I am, who I am, who I am.
Writing project prompt: Test
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Write at the Merge prompt:
I found a martyr in my bed tonightfrom Fun, Some nights
She stops my bones from wondering just who I am, who I am, who I am
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The lover of the limelight AND the silences between. That's such a great balance and image.
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DeleteI remember! The lips the teeth the tip of the tongue, the tip of the tongue taking a trip...
ReplyDeleteI second: the imagery is well-balanced and brilliant. Well played!
Thank you, Shelton. 'The tip of the tongue taking a trip' is fabulous as well ... I may have to steal that another time.
DeleteFantastic. The repetition like a mantra, the imagery and the internal narrative. Love it.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Cameron. I think I understand why a rosary is used in so many religions - that repetition and rhythm somehow pull us deeper.
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